"This piece presents a vivid and believable scene into which the author injects that "out-of-body" experience of fullfilling a lost opportunity." - rlkirkland
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Theme 11: Memory by Djoseph
when the bus stopped
I looked out over
green fields of barley
and felt a sudden urge to run
my hands
through the ears
but I remained in my seat
and it left
a memory
waving at the stop
I looked back
knowing that it
would be wading
through emerald waves
without me
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When the bus stopped
I looked out over
green fields of barley
and suddenly felt like running
my hands
through the ears.
But I remained in my seat
leaving a memory
waving at the stop
knowing it would be
wading through emerald waves
without me.
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